And thank you Andrew.
I think perhaps this sense of memories impinging wildly may get ever
keener the older we get?
BTW: if you do want to remove that stanza, well I can see it, but
didn't feel the necessity. The catch-all aspect of the poem felt good.
Doug
On 23-Nov-05, at 5:22 PM, Andrew Burke wrote:
> Doug - absolutely with you in this circumstance. & I loved 'glisten
> another moment over' so much can be read so many ways ...
>
> Thanks.
>
> Andrew
>
Douglas Barbour
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Shakespeare
Drag yr mouldy old bones
Up these stairs & tell me
What you died of,
I think
I’ve got it
Too.
Sharon Thesen
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