Yes, much more satisfying this way without the "I".
Four of us agree! amazing!
Strange - I enjoy this kind of "still-life" poem onscreen,
but if I read them in a book they usually don't grab me.
Why???
Janet
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Poems at Proximity:
http://www.arach.net.au/~huxtable/janet/proximity.html
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