Thanks, Judy Da Blonde Bombshell ... It is a ship with no name at present. I
am flat out trying to meet a deadline for tomorrow with pages to go - and
information to research, so I can't even get back to it and attempt to tune
it some more for awhile. But your encouragement will help me return to it
after tomorrow :-) (And again it didn't have those one line spacings when
it left here - and, yes, I have all the ways to fix it - but they never
remain in this head. I thought I had put hard returns on lines which I
thought fixed the problem, but it seems not.)
Androo
----- Original Message -----
From: "judy prince" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Thursday, September 22, 2005 6:09 PM
Subject: Re: [POETRYETC] snap
> Wow, Androo, what a gift you have for pithy sentences! (And, for
goodness'
> sake, someone please supply me with a better-sounding descriptor than
> "pithy"!)
>
> Each image conjures careful sight-thought connections, each growing, layer
> on layer, to a spectacular quiet mood. The poem's title, Androo?
>
> Thanks for the poem!
>
> Judy Da Blonde Bomb
>
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