> Thanks Stephen,
>
> I was 50/50 on the 'of'.
Now are you 51/49 in my favor or still in favor "of"??!!
S
>
> Best,
> Jill
>
> On Thursday, September 15, 2005, at 02:17 AM, Stephen Vincent wrote:
>
>> I like this very much, Jill - deep under- and over-currents here!
>> I would drop the 'of' in the last line.
>>
>
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