I like this very much, Jill - deep under- and over-currents here!
I would drop the 'of' in the last line.
Stephen V
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> Late trains drift from bedsides
> where specimens in glass remain
> unresolved
> like a virgin or the unique
> can only be erased once
> unlike the many - again.
>
> Tendencies soften and paunch
> the mantles covering the dead
> the suspects, the all.
>
> How, ultimately, to purge weather
> the terrible suns
> in which, half-held
> is the question to the answer.
> What is not obvious, is.
>
> So, where's the adhesiveness gone?
> With mud and slake?
> It was latent
> but now annealled
> in the open and eligible - again.
>
> In this there's something of spring
> white bud, dark branch
> and the disregard above
> of bird and windrush.
>
>
> Jill Jones
> 11.30am, Surry Hills, 14 September 2005
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