Dearest Mouldy P,
I, too, prefer this version to your revised one. I differ, tho, a bit with
Hal. I like this version exactly as it is, preferring, especially, the
original way you worded the last 3 lines.
And I loved Hal's Henny Youngman quote!
GGoose of the OmniP who still loves Albert and he is not jailbait, nor is VB
a possum. I will leave you this morning with a delightful tune that Mr.
Johnson's father used to sing to him and the other kids:
(the tune's that of "Oh Susannah!")
'Possum up a 'simmon tree,
raccoon on the ground,
Raccoon says to 'possum,
"th'ow me a 'simmon down.
I hope VileBoris Catflap (one ear??!!! really???!!) enjoys the little tune.
----- Original Message -----
From: "Patrick McManus" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Wednesday, September 07, 2005 2:27 AM
Subject: snapshot~07 September 2005
> HIS POETRY
>
> gradually
> his poetry
> developed
> over the years
> from a small
> silver spittoon
> to a full
> scale sewage
> finely macerated
> ocean outfall.
>
>
> pmcmanus
> raynes park london uk
> N690
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