Stephen
The negative space did 'collapse', but not before I got to see it in its original form. Both versions caused me double-takes. Thanks for the wake-up poem with my coffee.
Cheers
Bridget
Stephen Vincent <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
Thank you, Bridget. Hope all the negative space did not disappear between
the first and last letters in each line as I wanted it to appear?
Instead of Summer, that would be a winter's day, indeed - or a "collapsed"
sonnet as different from an "erased" one.
Actually, if things did collapse, a relatively concrete and stable version
appears on my blog.
Stephen V
Blog: http://stephenvincent.durationpress.com
> Love this, Stephen...Good stuff.
> Bridget
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> Stephen Vincent wrote:
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> Erased Sonnet/ Number 18
> William Shakespeare - 1593
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> Shall y?
> T e:
> R y,
> A e:
> S s,
> A d,
> A s,
> B d:
> B e,
> N r,
> N e,
> W t;
> S e,
> So thee.
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> Stephen Vincent -2005
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