Gosh well whatto -all this tumbling of daphnis and Chloe very erotico (he
shyly remarketh whilst while whistling whelks
It is rather a diff poem
What tumble??sea tumbles ??
Groucho P manga siestatiming
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-----Original Message-----
From: Poetryetc provides a venue for a dialogue relating to poetry and
poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of judy prince
Sent: 22 August 2005 14:02
To: [log in to unmask]
Subject: Re: Sea Song
Dearest Mouldy P,
Since I am your humble servant, I've done all that you requested. I've
un-indigoed "indigo," vanished into moist air my 'vacant footprints," and,
finally, vaporized my "infinity." Oh, and then I changed the original date
which had seemed odd to you, so that it is now my very own birthdate, all
spelt out properly whilst you and poor near-earless VB commune about
enlarging his catflap so that his new plastic ears will not be struck off in
an instant.
See what you think of your (and my) new pome, Mouldy P:
Sea Song
a dark moving sea
echoes Daphnis and Chloe
tumble towards
touching the sky
*****
22nd day, eighth month, fifteen-hundred sixty-one
Judy Prince
From: "Patrick McManus"
Subject: Re: Sea Song
> Judy -I old git have some reservations here like the date 8-22-05 ha! 12
> months in a civilsed year not all this american nonsense!!humph
>
> Also I get a bit tangled with 'vacant footprints in moist air'
> 'infinity' somehow grates and 'indigo' seems a bit dropped in
> Still back to sorting out all my junk
>
> Well now -I am missing Vile Boris who is at the vet's having an operation
> for a bad ear -what if he come back earless -still that might also
> terrify???or we could get a nice pair of plastic ones or with built in
> lamps
> which could come on at twilight for his hunting -not not ermine!
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Poetryetc provides a venue for a dialogue relating to poetry and
> poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of judy prince
> Sent: 22 August 2005 10:56
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: Sea Song
>
> Sea Song
>
>
> a dark moving sea
> echoes Daphnis and Chloe
> in the moist air
>
> vacant footprints
> tumble toward infinity
> touching the indigo sky
>
> ~~~
>
> Judy Prince
> 8.22.05
>
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