Judy - thanks for your response. Dominic and I look over our shoulder(s) and
see what we have stepped in, or on. T'aint no no-never-mind thing.
I walked a lot yesterday - nearly four hours - and the effects of that
exercise, plus the jolt of winter sunlight in which I walked, seemed to keep
me up later and later, and I felt like I was at the beginning of a manic
episode. After a meeting tomorrow with a diligent reader, I will be
rewriting my novel - which is probably what is putting the heat on my brain.
Bro
----- Original Message -----
From: "judy prince" <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Thursday, July 21, 2005 1:39 AM
Subject: Re: snap again Burke
> Bro B,
>
> esp liked "I'm edgy and scratchy" and "staring at the screen expecting it
> to tell me something in its own tongue" and "it's probably a poem or some
> other misfit a lame secular angel intensely looking for attention and
> worth every minute of it worth every minute of it." Excellent.
>
> Just a question: Are you and Dominic consulting one another on Snap
> "threads"? I've brought it up simply bcuz I most enjoyed in your first
Snap
> o' the day:
>
> "two ducks waddle up to see me
> from the neighbourhood lake
> one shits the other
> walks in it"
>
> That is some deep . . . um, stuff, Bro!
>
> Truly B,
>
> Judygoldsailboatingprince
>
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Andrew Burke" <[log in to unmask]>
> To: <[log in to unmask]>
> Sent: Wednesday, July 20, 2005 12:38 PM
> Subject: snap again Burke
>
>
> peas and potato
> at midnight I'm edgy
> and scratchy rain
> has been through and
> night whistles to itself
>
> I am wide-eyed awake
> staring at the screen
> expecting it to
> tell me something
> in its own tongue
>
> something is brewing
> something is 'up'
> something is coming
> 'around that corner
> or whistling down the river
>
> come on, deliver -
> to me' I am
> crowding in on me
> when I'm like this
> it's probably a poem
> or some other misfit
>
> a lame secular angel
> intensely looking
> for attention
> and worth every minute of it
> and worth every
> minute of it
>
>
>
> Andrew Burke
> Mt Lawley
> midnight & shortly thereafter
> 20 july 2005
>
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