Dom:
> Oh *shite* Dom, you ought to be ashamed of yourself -- "thorough"
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Now you mention it, "thorough" really makes that line - the way it
rolls off the tongue...
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<sigh>
The sodding RHYTHM doesn't work (leave aside what was actually +printed+ in
*Miscellaneous Poems*) if you read "through".
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> Bottom line is Marvell's is more effective as a real-life seduction poem.
Has this been empirically tested?
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Worked for me.
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The *only* person I ever managed to seduce with a poem, I'm now married to.
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Lucky you.
... Back to the Teapot.
Da Dormouse.
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