> Oh *shite* Dom, you ought to be ashamed of yourself -- "thorough"
Goes the other way in the Miserere: wash me throughly of my sins...
Now you mention it, "thorough" really makes that line - the way it
rolls off the tongue...
> Bottom line is Marvell's is more effective as a real-life seduction poem.
Has this been empirically tested?
The *only* person I ever managed to seduce with a poem, I'm now married to.
Dominic
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