Hi Stephen,
I hope I'm not squeezing it too tight it gets kill't. But it's good to move
from my normal looseness.
I was wondering about apricot. It reminds of that Inger Christensen
line 'apricot trees exist, apricot trees exist' or something like that.
JJ
> Good, Jill. You get it - the lang - down real tight so that it cannot do
> anything, ultimately, but burst. And "orange" serves you well.
> (I did have "pale apricot roses" - which are orange enough.)
>
> Stephen V
>
>
>
> > Grot among root
> > Still thaw
> > But the chill
> > Crawls a glimmer
> > Dawn dark’s cold
> > Hasten and haze
> > Hill line’s blurr
> >
> > Ground brown
> > Seed furred
> > Branch flare
> > Splay to orange
> > Ochre and flange
> > Year’s fit
> > Now for fire
> >
> >
> > Jill Jones
> > Marrickville, 8am, 4 May
> > 2005
>
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