Deborah! I like that li'l pup poem - but I'd put a break after 'flip and
start a new line -
left ear first, flip
and flour yourself whiter
on flakes or petals
Whaddya reckon?
Andrew
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From: "Deborah L. Humphreys" <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Wednesday, April 27, 2005 11:56 PM
Subject: Re: Snap/"A Canto of Mutabilitie (was Re: snap from memory)
Ken, you are fast!
I like your song/tune references. Our dog, Dingle, loves to play in whatever
falls from the sky, today it was the sheets of rain.
oh pup, you dive in
left ear first, flip and flour youself whiter
on flakes or petals
one last romp
carried back inside
asperges
Deborah at Exit 15W
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