Jill I could see you floating out there high up in the clouds!
P ruckle P
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Sent: 16 November 2005 05:00
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Subject: snap - jones
Sorry, my subject line wasn't adjusted. But I did like Max's rugby dog
round-
up. It's all a bit soccerish in Sydney today (for the clash with Uruguay -
who, I assume, will be the ones going to the World Cup).
J
The cool change
I lay out in clouds
while the sun falls into cold time
edges beautiful and grey
I want to say, on the ends of sheets
this is like walking through, full of rain
scattered within me
I am preparing to go out
I want the ends of pages said
though edges are leached
I have exhausted the means
it is also like the rise
to switch towards
what I wanted to say, on the tips of leaves
we have rain which was full
and streets poured away
Jill Jones
3.10pm, 16 November, Sydney
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