Very nice, Stephen.
> The woman who appears uncombed to shout atop a long
> Open balustrade of white, yellow, red and pale-apricot roses.
I have trouble reading this part - some rhythmic problem - too many
stresses in the second line perhaps.
Janet
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Poems at Proximity:
http://www.arach.net.au/~huxtable/janet/proximity.html
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