Hi there Gary, suggestions taken. Thanks very much. CW, Mary :O)
--- Gary Blankenship <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Mary, a fine read. I like the form, which I think you've used before. A
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> bump or two
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> It matched the cardigan she made for me.
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> cut she made for me? or change to knitted?
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> where those things have got to now.
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> this line doesn't work for me. things should be gifts or something else
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> Thanks and smiles.
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> Gary
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>
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>
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Good Cheer & Be Well,
Maryann Hazen Stearns
"Under The Limbo Stick" http://www.geocities.com/Faerhart/
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