Hi Mary,
I like lots about June Fourth, esp. how you move from
the I remembers to the I don’t remember.
But here I think something needs:
My grandmother made me a purse
from the bottom half of a bleach bottle.
The top was crocheted with green yarn.
It matched the cardigan she made for me.
How about something like:
My grandmother made me a purse
from the bottom of a bleach bottle,
the top crocheted with green yarn,
and a matching cardigan.
??
the dark imitation of an angry porcupine. Fab line
And here, I’d go with
I don't remember
where those things are*.
Love this:
imagining the drops of spring rain
on the cellar door {but,“are” I would cut] knitting
needles
clicking together all through the night.
Thnaks for the good read & for the tinker.
Later
calaya
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