> Hello again Frank,
This poem has a bleak and vaguely disturbing atmosphere (I mean the reason is vague, not the atmosphere). I think it works effectively, though I couldn´t `explain´ what is happening, or has happened.
Best wishes, Mike
> Lähettäjä: Frank <[log in to unmask]>
> Päiväys: 2004/02/20 pe PM 02:54:29 GMT+02:00
> Vastaanottaja: [log in to unmask]
> Aihe: sub - that's all (last saturday)
>
> that's all (last saturday)
>
> jesus doesn't live in bed north 8
> he might have visited on saturday
> that's all
> that's all
>
> the room is empty but for a bed
> but for a blanket
>
> but for a pillow
> and a lonely girl
> who believes something
> that she can't explain
> except to know it isn't jesus anymore
> no
>
> he was a visitor last saturday
> and that's all
>
> ~
>
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