Hi Sally
I like this a lot but I think that it would be more
powerful without the last two lines...
eaten with ghosts of siblings
and children who have grown
is great
and the notions of TOurists etc seeemed intrusive &
jarred.
Is winter really gone there already? lucky duck
later
calaya
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