In a message dated 01/06/2004 10:42:22 AM Central Standard Time,
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<< However there are two places in the poem where I am cued to expect a rhyme
scheme that is 'chew/do', early in the poem and the closing 'flows/knows'.
When I am cued in this way I feel disappointed when it does not materialize
and a little distracted. I always think that if this occurs with me I would
they were rather tucked away inside a line rather than at a line end >>
Excellent bit of criticism and I agree. Thanks, Arthur. Sue
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