Dear Gary,
Please consider whether a list this long serves to diminish the overall
impact of the piece.
Regards,
Russ
Russ, yes.
Seriously, how long is this? 7 average S, 1 long one and one one liner.
Less than 50 lines!
Could I say it all is 1/3 less? Esp that long list S. Perhaps, but perhaps
a good rant needs room to build up steam.
Thanks.
Gary
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