Thanks,
Colin
----- Original Message -----
From: "calaya" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Tuesday, January 27, 2004 10:41 AM
Subject: Re: ReVision:Gunmetal Mourning/was Blues/colin
> What did s(he) mean by killing the drafts?Colin---
>
> oh, she [Dafna Ezran,] meant overworked... until the
> essence is lost/gone.
> thanks again
> see ya
> cslaya
>
> > colin, thanks a lot* for the pointing out. I'm
> going
> > to take the two versions and listent to them again
> > soon and i have printed out your notes and certainly
> > will be glad to have them.>
> > the 1st po class i took, those few years ago, prof
> > said i was inclined to "kill" my drafts. couple of
> > your specific points reminded me that i still have a
> > wee bit of that habit, so THANKS for that! re:
> "images
> > drawn out into long abstract phrases," they're in
> the> stew, too.> see ya
> > calaya
>
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