What did s(he) mean by killing the drafts?
Colin
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From: "calaya" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Friday, January 23, 2004 1:50 AM
Subject: Re: ReVision:Gunmetal Mourning/was Blues/colin
> colin, thanks a lot* for the pointing out. I'm going
> to take the two versions and listent to them again
> soon and i have printed out your notes and certainly
> will be glad to have them.
>
> the 1st po class i took, those few years ago, prof
> said i was inclined to "kill" my drafts. couple of
> your specific points reminded me that i still have a
> wee bit of that habit, so THANKS for that! re: "images
> drawn out into long abstract phrases," they're in the
> stew, too.
> see ya
> calaya
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