Yes,
Colin
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From: "Ryfkah *" <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Wednesday, January 21, 2004 3:52 AM
Subject: Re: Casablanca/Ryfkah
> Shalom Colin
>
> Thanks, I will think about it. The Map ([log in to unmask]) will have an
issue
> about Casablanca and I wrote this poem for it. Flight as in a butterfly
from a
> cacoon I think.
>
> kol tuv, Ryfkah
>
>
> In a message dated 01/20/2004 10:05:27 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
>
> << Ryfkah,
>
>
> I enjoyed Casablanca on AMC and found it uplifting, but I'd indicate a
pause
> after the first line to give the reader a chance to pick uip the rhythm of
the
> poem.
>
>
> There's a lot in this poem about "flight".
>
>
> BW
>
>
> Colin
>
> >>
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