Shalom Colin
Thanks, I will think about it. The Map ([log in to unmask]) will have an issue
about Casablanca and I wrote this poem for it. Flight as in a butterfly from a
cacoon I think.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
In a message dated 01/20/2004 10:05:27 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< Ryfkah,
I enjoyed Casablanca on AMC and found it uplifting, but I'd indicate a pause
after the first line to give the reader a chance to pick uip the rhythm of the
poem.
There's a lot in this poem about "flight".
BW
Colin
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