hello,matt?
there is something atractive about this work but i
can't get hold enuff to say what it is, except that
it's feeling like it revolves around water. but i want
to hear this, so i thot i'd just share with you a few
things that fell as if they stop me.
ink: such an open word, could mean so many different
things as a methaphor; after first read i just go for
darkness of the obsidian sort.
dumb: means mute to me, which doesn't work in this
work, for me, because Fluids sound. make sense?
if you man stupid, as in meaningless,then, well, maybe
i get a glympse of what the work wants to say?
the piece is* fluid, so...if u want the reader to end
up floating 'round, like life often feels, then OK,
but i sure had to work awflly hard to hear this. Am I
way, way, way off?
later cousin
calaya
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