To everyone who sent in crits about this poem. Thank you very much but my
server has been giving problems so have lost a lot of mails, I remembered a
few suggestions and will work on it some more with the rythmn etc and will
omit the last line as suggested. Oh and Christina about the rum kissess, my
only christmas kisses were from my two dogs and these were whiskery sloppy
licks. I poem in here somewhere. Bye Sally J
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