> Hello Ryfkah,
Many thanks for your comments. I´m glad you enjoyed the poem.
Best wishes, Mike
> Lähettäjä: Ryfkah * <[log in to unmask]>
> Päiväys: 2004/01/17 la PM 08:29:05 GMT+02:00
> Vastaanottaja: [log in to unmask]
> Aihe: Re: New sub: Dining out
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> In a message dated 01/14/2004 4:47:59 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
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> << There is no denying he was hooked
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> on sloe eyes and the special creaminess
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> of a dark-haired woman´s skin,
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> yet he never felt a thing
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> before her penetrating glance
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> as she worked her knife the length of a sole
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> and separated flesh from bone. >>
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> I like this stanza best; I like the sensuality in the poem. The mix of the
> mundane and sensual is terrific.
>
> kol tuv, Ryfkah
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