Hi Bob,
yep, the guy in the supermarket was the next piece.
He's not actually having the snip - he's reversing it. The series is an
exploration of the process, with a couple of men's health issues touched
lightly in the process.
Cheers,
Frank
> Hi Frank,
> OK, you're arguing well for its inclusion - maybe I'm a little concerned
> that the poor blokey who's had the snip isn't coming across too strongly
at
> the end of the piece. I'm left with a clearer image of the woman in the
> bedroom than I am of the bloke the piece began with. But if the next piece
> starts with a clear image of the guy then that might do the trick...
> And if the bloke being head-butted in a supermarket is next then... Ouch,
> point made!
> Bob
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