Morning Sally,
Strange that you should also use 'anymore' at the end of your poem because I've been pondering on Terri's 'anymore', trying to work out exactly why it doesn't feel quite right to me. Well, I've failed so far and perhaps I'm completely wrong.
This is a lovely idea. I'm wondering whether you could get more mileage from it? It feels as if you've struck gold and it might be fun to chip away and see if there's more there.
bw
christina
Today I was told that being of a certain age I do not even come into the
camel rating, which amused me very much so I wrote this little poem or
ditty.
Camel Rating
My camel rating is nil
I am not worth one of them
not two humps or even one
I have no rate of exchange
and no market forces rule me
which simply means
no one wants to play footsie with me anymore.
sally james
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