Thank you my sisterpoet. Our women's voices are unique.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
In a message dated 11/25/2004 12:04:36 PM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< I noticed this one last week and I thought what a difficut subject, done
well and with good sounds.
it is a difficult subject to write about a woman in labour not only because
men would have trouble identifying but probably for several other reasons. I
think the emotions and experiences are rather extreme and not easy to put a
fnger on either at the time or in recollection. I think the best comparison
for men would prbably be poetry about being under fire in battle. But you
have made this poem romantic and that is a feature of the subject too. i
think its well done.
bw
SallyE >>
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