Thank you James for your comments.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
In a message dated 11/06/2004 4:00:28 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< Hi Ryfkah,
I like this slightly post modern stutter used here. I feel its used to
enhance the piece to effect rather than just being used as an effect if you
get what I mean.
I like the poem too.
bw
James >>
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