> Hello Gary,
Thanks for your comments on this piece. I´m undergoing a rethink and possible cutting ....what is it? process? dilemma? mull? Anyway, I´m mulling it over, that´s for sure.
Best wishes, Mike
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> Mike, I would start at
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> Sujata, my squirrels also chase each other
> round and round the trunk of a tree.
> It´s not as meaningful as anger,
> not so directed as lust. I´ve seen them touch.
>
> The parts before that too prosey to me.
>
> Good end.
>
> Thanks.
>
> Gary
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