Thank you Ryfkah. I do write from my heart and try to tell the truth as I
see it but like I have said to others maybe this was just that bit too sad
to circulate. Thanks Sally J
>From: Ryfkah * <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: new sub The going away
>Date: Sat, 16 Oct 2004 22:30:43 EDT
>
>In a message dated 10/15/2004 2:19:55 PM, [log in to unmask] writes:
><<
>Wrinkles tell the story
>folds of skin, fall in waves
>hang like a noose
>slack, around his neck >>
>
>Sad imagery from an even sadder poem; you certainly put the passion of
>emotion in your poem.
>
>kol tuv, Ryfkah
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