In a message dated 10/11/2004 2:21:24 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< Pyjamas damp,
stars on the periphery,
teddy's paws rasp
on prickly cheeks. >>
Great opening. I kind of get lost in the bloating later on...probably part
of the intended sense of delirium.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
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