I need to look at my bird book again. It may have been a heron after all.
James
>From: Gary Blankenship <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: New sub: An Egret
>Date: Sat, 2 Oct 2004 07:27:00 -0700
>
>James, nothing like an egret, unless it is a cormorant. You might consider
>line breaks.
>
>it aped the human state
>and was not engaged in something
>natural
>
>or
>
>it aped the human state
>and was not engaged
>in something natural
>
>Not sure of
>
>for sand and water trod harbours food
>
>Puzzlement.
>
>Thanks.
>
>Gary
>
>
>
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