Thank you for your insight.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
In a message dated 09/30/2004 5:36:59 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< I like this poem, but it is awfully cryptic. I think you need to open it
up
to us more and make more complete sentences rather than sentence fragments. I
feel there is so much here, but only a small part of it is being developed in
the sentence structure. Open please. Thanks, Sue >>
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