James, I like this one - Wangish tis, but
It's better now
though the wind blows hard and
cold up the estuary and
others have gone for the season
have dropped their facade of ownership
of living around here
a bump, maybe
Others gone the season,
their façade of ownership dropped.
Elsewhere, S2 the double gulls and wind in L2 and the end of S2.
Thanks.
Gary
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