Hi,
I was going to reply to say I couldn't SEE the poem, just a purple square on
my screen - but then, when I pressed, reply it's appeared!
And I can't work out anything from the last line. I can find possible
meanings/interpretations from all the others - but the last one (with its
last two words) is eluding me altogether.
I also wondered if the title might help me fathom something out of the way
the poem's ending... but I can't make it click.
Bob
(who might well find that it all slips easily into what it's doing in the
middle of the night, or half way through travelling tomorrow...)
>From: The Walkers <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: New Sub: Fluid
>Date: Mon, 12 Jan 2004 18:42:32 -0000
>
>Sink in the ink, dumb ocean.
>Ride a rip tide motion.
>
>Motion rip in the ocean ride.
>Sink a dumb ink tide.
>
>Ocean motion in the ink.
>Rip ride a tide, dumb sink.
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