Hi calaya,
Hey, this is really great! I read it and want to stand up, stamp my feet,
sway...
The mix of single-syllable/double-syllable words works so well - it's
varied, it's bouyant, it makes me want to repeat it when I've read it
through.
I like it.
Bob


>From: calaya <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: cjw's bonkers: jam
>Date: Fri, 9 Jan 2004 10:43:45 -0800
>
>[Using A E I O, and C L J M N S W Y] this was a great
>challange, christina, and thanks for it. i'd so many
>choices, and still...
>i've hear this too long;now, what do u's thimk? [i
>really missed the u]
>
>Jam
>
>Come in, yo-yos, come in, yams
>Come in jeans, come on; jam
>
>Come in clay, come away, come cane
>Come wane, come caw, come awe
>Come alloy, come joy
>
>Come in, yo-yos, come in, yams
>Come in jeans, come on; jam
>
>Come all, come alms, come lies
>Come wise, come loans, come moans
>Come oasis, come as is
>
>Come in, yo-yos, come in, yams
>Come in jeans, come on; jam
>
>Come lamia, come my ma, come lean
>Come clean, come lass, come ass
>Come on ace, come in lace
>
>Come in, yo-yos, come in, yams
>Come in jeans, come on; jam
>
>Come on new, come on ewe, come ill
>come nil, come moss, come on loss
>come insane, come lame
>
>Come in, yo-yos, come in, yams
>Come in jeans, come on; jam
>
>Come on, woman, come as I am
>Come acclaim, come as one clan
>Come sassy, come slain
>
>Come in, yo-yos, come in, yams
>Come in jeans, come on; jam
>
>Come on man, come as can, come calls
>Come walls, come mills
>Come wills, come wail
>
>Come in, yo-yos, come in, yams
>Come in jeans, come on; jam
>
>Come clay, come away, come cane
>Come wane, come caw, come awe
>Come alloy, come joy
>
>Come in, yo-yos, come in, yams
>Come in jeans, come on; jam
>
>
>
>
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