Interesting point. It could be argued that an alertness of whiskers is equivalent to a group of people, is then group a modifier?? Someone else must answer. Arthur.
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From: The Pennine Poetry Works on behalf of Gary Blankenship
Sent: Tue 07/09/2004 16:27
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Subject: Re: Fox with his modifiers removed-poor thing
Arthur, good rewrite, but and I do not know about such things, but here
the ferocity of his mask.
An alertness of whiskers bristled,
aren't these modifiers in different clothing?
alert whiskers
but I am likely wrong.
Smiles and thanks.
Gary
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