Hi David,
I'm thinking about the past or the present tense with this poem. I sense the
past tense makes it more reflective; the present tense, however, gives it a
bit more drama.
It was the line with the word "seen" in it puzzled me a little as well.
And I enjoyed visiting your art work!
Bob
>From: David Bursey <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: People inside
>Date: Thu, 2 Sep 2004 13:28:08 -0230
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