Thanks Gary for your careful reading, will change this. bw sally j
>From: Gary Blankenship <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: newsub Comfort Blancket
>Date: Wed, 1 Sep 2004 06:59:02 -0700
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>Sally, a fine read. Nice work. Here
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>I think of dainty little toes that warmed (no that)
>upon the warm stone pot
>as I watched lone candle's burn (a lone candle?)
>that danced the shadows on the wall (no the)
>then how I gripped on comfort cloth (no then)
>when illness screamed within my throat
>till mother came with soothing voice (her soothing?)
>to chase the demons from my bed
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>Smiles and thanks.
>
>Gary
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