Grassy, even with the dolphins, I like the poem, but wonder if it might be
formatted differently, instead of
I will seize his shaggy throat and he will pull me through the elements
as the dolphin drew Arion up through the eye she had made
in the skin of the sea. Eyes will not be needed. Vision will become
being. Beyond there will be grass greener than the smell of rain
and no sadness. I believe him. We carry our feeding bowls out
into the garden and fill them with sun. Bowls will not be needed.
maybe
I will seize his shaggy throat and he will pull me through the elements
as the dolphin drew Arion up through the eye she had made
in the skin of the sea.
Eyes will not be needed.
Vision will become being. Beyond there will be grass greener
than the smell of rain and no sadness. I believe him. We carry
our feeding bowls out into the garden and fill them with sun.
Bowls will not be needed.
or not.
Thanks.
Gary
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