Thank you for your idea.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
In a message dated 08/25/2004 12:14:38 PM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< I got a strong sense of the pyramids from this poem. I love the way it
flows. What half-worked for me is "green". Nile grass seems like it
should be something else besides "green" it seems more mysterious than the
word "green" portrays to me. I hope this is helpful. Annabelle
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