I love this. Homemade cheddar? My, that sounds good. Suggestion: change
you to we. It would be much smoother. Sue
Sue, the first changed. Smiles.
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reminds me that i heard a little
poem around a live vole trapped in there, a few years
ago. hmmm vague memory but i may look for it.
-Calaya
Please do post.
Thanks.
Gary
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