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Subject:

(The third in a series of transformations of Wang Wei's River Wang poems.)

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Gary Blankenship <[log in to unmask]>

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The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>

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Wed, 18 Aug 2004 21:32:34 -0700

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(The third in a series of transformations of Wang Wei's River Wang poems.)

A River Transformed III:  After Wang Wei's Luan House Rapids -

Beyond the Estuary

A torrent drowns duckweed and bulrush;
squalls whip cattails and willow thickets.
Canvas wet outside and in, soaked shoes
squish-squish with each mud-mired step.

A trickle, rivulet, rush flows over field,
macadam; into cellars and badger holes.
Boats break from their moorings, trash bins
float like empty shells past broken dolls and trikes.

On a cloudless night, we embrace the stars;
we pour diamonds through our stained fingers.
On a cold autumn night, jewels turn to flotsam;
promises dull, lumps of cinder without warmth.

A summer's debris drifts to block the drain,
a white feather trapped between stones.

The literal translation by Wai-Lim Yip:  Rill of the House of the Luans

blast-blast  ---  autumn  rain/s  middle
lightly-lightly/shallow-shallow  ---  rock  flow  pour
jump   wave/s-bead/s  self mutual/each other   splash
white  egret  startle  again  down

Blast of wind amidst autumn rains,
patter-patter upon rocky clod.
Jumping beads splash against each other.
A white egret - started - then down.

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