Need I say that this is two poems? or that there needs to be some more
significant bridge between the first and second sections?
Some lovely stuff in here - the poignancy of reflection. I particularly
like the undeveloped film.
Needs a bit of pruning?
Catherine, always - until a miku left?
beyond the mirror
yesterday
prepares a viewing
A bridge?
Perhaps, I need to think, but I did think so.
Thanks and smiles.
Gary
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