Sally, a good revision to Trees. I like blaeberries, but here
> this fruit we breakfast on,
> freeze down, consume as pies,
>
> juice thickened by heat,
> sweetened with honey.
>
I wonder if you could cut these S to be one 3 line S to retain form.
And here
Let's go pick blaeberries again,
> strong, dark, sweet blaeberries
>
> that lie in lairs
> as though they understand
> the country's dangerous.
perhaps start
blaeberries lie in lairs
> as though they understand
> the country's dangerous.
I would not repeat the title.
BTW, we have none here. If we do we call them a blueberry of some sort and
we have lots of those.
Smiles and thanks.
Gary
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