Hi again Gary - Lots of numbers here! I reckon this could stand as a fair
poem if you ditch everything after the asterisk. Too much information
distracted me from the essence of the piece.
Catherine
All that after the * was mostly true. Sorry you did dig the adventure.
Smiles and thanks.
Gary
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